the Girl Above the Clouds

the Girl Above the Clouds

A Poem by kayla

She removes herself from the situation,

and rises up above the clouds.

She doesn't look back down at the wreckage,

only up at the positively endowed.

She has moved beyond the negativity

and she will show you how.

Just look up at the sky and you'll see her

rising up above the clouds.

© 2012 kayla


Author's Note

kayla
I wrote this after finding this picture. Please tell me what you think(:

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Beautiful and sweet. Love the underlying hope.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice and hopeful!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love it. Very inspiring. A needed poem for the women of the struggle, any struggle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


this was great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I can see how the photo could inspire such a piece of poetry. I like how you refer to the area below her as wreckage, well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think it is honestly wonderful. We can all hope to be that kind of girl!

Posted 11 Years Ago


awww lovely ...good job sis

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on July 12, 2012
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kayla
kayla

Los Angeles, CA



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Becoming active on this site again! Originally started my account as teenager, but am a young woman now with hopefully still just as much to say. I write mostly poetry (but occasionally short stori.. more..

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