Umm... lyrics?

I can't make titles and this is a song for my girlfriend, so PLEASE edit it for me :)

Your name is like water on my dry lips,
It's leaving me gasping after every sip
because you leave me breathless.

There's 24 hours in every day
And i wish i could use all of them to say-
to say that i love you.

You're my sunshine when life gets dark.
Y'know cupid's arrow really hit the mark
Because I find myself to be
In love with you.

Lollipops, gum, sugar daddies and bears,
Out of all of this, none of it compares
To the sweet little angel
That I love the most.

There's blisters on my feet, from circling the world
Just so that i could see my girl
And kiss her softly.

They say thirteen's unlucky,
But i beg to differ.
If it never happened
I wouldn't be with her.
She's the girl of my dreams
And she's stolen my heart
One day  I wish that we're never apart.

So here's to holding you close, and closing my eyes.
And feeling sublime when the sparks start to fly.
Oh, i know it for sure, that i love you too.

Author's Note

Please be rather critical with reviewing my work, i like it.