Internal-external configuration reality

-Inside-

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Tropical flowers and rainfall flourish in the chambers of his heart

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The shadowy chambers that for long were crushed and torn apart

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The shadows of the past seem like a grotesque myth

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Through thick 'n' thin this is what he's left with

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He renounced his devil threw away his greed

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He is all that he will ever need

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-Outside-

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The sun has sunken-moon cozy and dim

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Oblivious to the distant chaos shaping around him

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Strange rainy night

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-Synthesis-

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Walking into his inner light

 

 

 

    

         

 

 

Reviews

[Joℏn / Jack / Turtle ..]

I'm delighted to keep seeing us writing on similar themes!

[Mockingbird]

brings to mind a man who has gone through self-actualization. letting go of his past, perhaps atoning for his sin of greed. 'walking into his inner light' that is something i aspire but hold myself back. this is a great lesson. very eloquent writing.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

The way you presented this is unique and powerful. The addition of the lines and then the final line being the sum of the parts and process above it. The last line seems to me to be the way chosen to handle all of the above, and seems the product of a long journey to find it. Just my take. This is different and very creative...also, a very though provoking read!

[_mal]

Interesting piece, I really like 'He is all that he will ever need' and the change afterwards, doesn't feel forced.