what do i do?

what do i do?

A Poem by koty bell
"

sad

"

what do i do?

 

your not there.

 

you left, dissapeared in thin air.

 

what do i do, without my wife?

 

the only reason i'm alive.

 

sadness takes over my whole being.

 

what do i do ?

 

pack up my stuff and leave?

 

forget about this haunting grief.

 

to this day i just don't see.

 

why you were taken away from me.

 

so to this i take whats left of you for me.

 

i will keep this forever.

 

your memory.

 

 

© 2010 koty bell


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This is very sad, yet inspiring because yes you may lose some one too soon but would you really want to forget them? It shows that you may attempt to move on but still remember the person for who they were when you had them instead of being overcome with grief. Great write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is very sad, yet inspiring because yes you may lose some one too soon but would you really want to forget them? It shows that you may attempt to move on but still remember the person for who they were when you had them instead of being overcome with grief. Great write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Roe
sad, sweet, and a very lovely write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Only mistake was your should be you're in the second line.

I liked the font in this poem, the words spoke to me.

I like the questioning, my favorite line was the ending, I will keep this forever your memory, thats beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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koty bell
koty bell

tempe, AZ



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i love to write my buddy kameron told me about this site. Youll find out farely quickly im a huge sublime fan and i have adhd.. Oh look a squirrel! :O im 21 yrs old i love all sports mainly football .. more..

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