i'll remember

I’ll remember

seeing you and catching my breath

how you asked me if I was happy

hugging like it might be goodbye

I’ll remember

you telling me it’s okay

talking like we had never stopped

my nerves shaking around you

loud music and shy smiles

I’ll remember

singing like we had microphones outside

intertwined hands listening to songs

the conversations that stretch endless

I’ll remember

the suddenness of your kiss on my cheek

you saying you get lost with me

and how it feels like there’s no reality

me not knowing what to say

I’ll remember

holding onto you like a float in high waters

dancing to songs in the kitchen

you pulling me close

smiling as our eyes open

I’ll remember

dancing by myself to love songs

catching my face in the mirror

and realizing

I might be in one with you

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are smitten indeed sir! A romantic freeverse. I like the hook used as the protagonist recalls these intimate interactions. Simple things that mean so much. The final line has a typo that needs to be addressed.