The Beginning

A young girl has haunting dreams.

 

When I came into play, I just saw a young girl lying on a large table. Pinned down, her golden hair was sprawled all over the table, and her bright green eyes illuminated the dimly lit room. That was when I first heard that voice. "We're all just here on this hell hole of a place we call Earth. We're nothing, just tiny specs in this big universe. We mean nothing, it's no use. So stop fighting, it'll do no good." HE said in a bellow. "Who...who are you?" The girl asked quietly. "I'm your worst nightmare." He replied. At that one moment I snapped back. That was one dream I woke up screaming from, I still don't know why, but I felt like I had some connection to it. And that's where it all started.

    

Author's Note

Just the intro, i decided to make it one chapter, and then lead up to more. Please review and be honest.

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

It was a nice introduction..very interesting..!!! You made this pull the the reader in, and make
them want to read more!!!i surely do anyways...

keep up the good work!!

~may

[Laraine Davis]

I think its good. I'm really curious about why you had a connection to the dream.
just work on quotation marks so you don't mess up your reader!