"Fists In The Sky"

Finding yourself and your stance on life.

Do you understand the words I speak

Rome cries for Greece

My thoughts are something you cannot teach

No sermon could be preached

No burden could be as profound

Within the ground lies the place

Where this skin and bones will one day be drowned

You cannot feel my soul

You cannot not fathom my understanding

Fists in the sky

March of the right

All kings die

That's when the legends arrive

The values of man

The anchors that no longer hold me

Love is the freedom that cannot control me

Love is the freedom that buried the old me

Love is the freedom that molded me

Many are lost like the waves in the sea

We are not accidental-like floating in the breeze

I am somebody

I refuse to wash in your tub of beliefs

Boys will sit

Men will stand

The men who stand know it all comes to an end

Every victor is not engraved in the sand

Walking outside of these societal walls

Fist in the sky until this world falls

Fist in the sky until my God arrives

Fist in the sky I shall never be denied.

Reviews

[C Gilliam]

This was very different from many of the poems on here that all have very common themes. I like how you cover many topics and even include love but in a way thats not like the many other love poems. Originality is always a good thing. You certainly have talent.

[Kristofer Ryan]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! It truly means a lot!

[Just Kim]

your last three lines stick out the most, I totally love this write.
I also love the part where in the three lines you mentioned
Love is freedom.... Awesome piece.

[Kristofer Ryan]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!