Forgotten

I'm completely forgotton,
By the one I love
Forgotten
By those who knew me
I feel like I'm standing alone,
Unnoticed
Unseen
Invisible by all
Even though I'm surrounded
I'm fading into the distance
Into the background
Into the starless night
I'm afraid to speak up
Afraid to let anyone know the real me
The dark is my only friend
He listens and talks to me
When no one else will
Ha on the inside I laugh at them all
They think I'm crazy
Sadtistic
Insane
A killer
They cast me out at will
An outcast
A nobody
Someone to forget
Someone forgotten.

Reviews

[Brianna]

I like this you did a good job!!! I really like the part where you say.. " They think im crazy sadistic a killer, they cast me out at will an outcast a nobody." that's my favorite part. I like how you described the things and you can really feel it and see it! great job keep writing Kryston Pickle!


Love your BFF
Brianna :P

[Khaled A Khunaifer]

Great poem, i believe this came from a real experience, I know this because I was once in there myself .. know that heaven is hidden within us