The past is the past

The past is the past

A Poem by ksf
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I recently faded away from two of my friends and wrote my first poem. It's not very good, so criticism would be helpful!

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The past is the past
that is what they tell me

the past is the past
but why do I still long for some parts of it?

The past is the past
I tell myself to forget it

the past is the past
Goodbye old friend 

© 2010 ksf


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ksf
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Alpheretta, GA



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