Dark Side

I'm from the dark side
but i'm one of the lucky ones

yes i've even had darkness
rolling through my veins
like thick sludge in a sewer
i've had darkness grab and hug
me like a nightmarish black bear
but i'm one of the lucky ones

i've got a ticket to heaven
just a little piece of paper
smaller than my thumb
yet it means everything
more than the world

no one can work their way to heaven
the darkness cannot switch on a light
the imperfect cannot become perfect
but the perfect can change us somehow.

#Kunal Kohli

Reviews

[Basu Gupta]

very well written..
Conveyed a very optimistic message via comparisions..the best part it is not monotonous which make it more intriguing..
Glad you're drowning in poetry field..
Just extract a little more coz, i know you do have a real potential..
Thanks for sharing..

[kunal kohli]

I appreciate what you said .. Thankyou