pills

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A Poem by Gabija

YOU made ME to take those damn pills
to make US feel so damn good

© 2019 Gabija


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You have a knack of offering the reader short pieces to make them think. You emphasis key words to link the me and you as a unit. I think you might want to erase the 'to' from the first line as it is gramatically incorrect.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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 Added on May 8, 2019
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Gabija
Gabija

Šiauliai, Lithuania



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addiction addiction

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