Unloved

Stumbling over broken hearts,
Ebbing away into flowing time.
Slowly breaking into parts,
Waiting for the sun to shine.

Broken so badly, a dying husk,
Waiting for the giving sun.
I've seen love's dusk,
But where's love's dawn?

The person I wait for,
That person will never come.
The truth burns to the core,
A giant tack stuck in my thumb.

Even if the truth makes me cry,
I will always wait, even when I die.

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

Such a sad poem. I think it's amazing how you made it with so much emotion!
'I've seen love's dusk,
But where's love's dawn?'
These lines are brilliant!