THE LEFT IMPRESSION

THE ROCKY WALLS OF MY HEART,

CARESSED BY THE GENTLE WIND OF YOUR AFFECTION,

OVER SPACE AND TIME,

SLOWLY IT WHEATHERS,

LEAVING AN IMPRINT, AN IMPRESS

OF LOVE, PASSION AND BLISS..

WHICH SHALL REMAIN TILL ETERNITY,

AND IN THE FURTURE MY SUBCONCIOUS MIND SHALL EXCAVATE THIS LEFT IMPRESSION,

TO SHOW THE AGE OF THE FUTURE HOW TRUE AND PURE YOUR LOVE HAS COME A LONG WAY TO BE.

 

Reviews

[Touché Armada]

This is I dont want to say pretty but I do want to say pretty sorry I know it sounds really lame. A pretty chain letter made of love only its not a letter but it is to pass on to who ever happens along. Giving out what you got.. Very nice indeed.

[Barbara Walker]

Like the imagery, an impression left so others may see, love the concept! Thanks for sharing! Barbara

[None]

What a beautiful poem. Your words touch my soul and cause me to think of circumstances which relate. Your whole poem shows love and tenderness for one. I especially like your words .....
"THE ROCKY WALLS OF MY HEART,
CARESSED BY THE GENTLE WIND OF YOUR AFFECTION,
OVER SPACE AND TIME,
SLOWLY IT WHEATHERS,
LEAVING AN IMPRINT, AN IMPRESS "
.....Your words really show what love can do and how it breaks down barriers...never forgotten.
Gorgeous poem!!