LOVE-JEALOUSY SCENE

At a certain joint,in public,

With people around,

Agirl apporached her boyfriend who was talkng to some other girl,

With a drink in hand she  began to holler,

Creating a scene, a love-jealousy scenario,

So puerile was her behaviour,

The other girl walks away,

Not knowing what to say,

She splashed the drink on him

With all eyes on him,

He turned around to the crowd and said,

"What the hell are you all looking at people?"

Turning around slowly he shouted "Do you know what you are looking at people?"

He pointed to his and shouted "That is love"

Paused an then said again "that is pure unadultrated love"

He stretched his arms towards his girl,

She threw the can of coke and ran towards him,

Crying she hugged him and said "oh! baby am sorry, i love you so much"

The whole scene like some movie, deeply touched started to applaude

Some guy was overheard saying,

"This guy is good, really good"

Reviews

[woodennymph]

i have to applaud your characters. the guy for his brilliance and the girl for her guts to create the scene in the first place. i like it because it presents reality and though as a woman i don't think guys who get away with that should roam free, i have to admit that it happens and you presented it real well. great job!

I would have to agree, that guy is really good.

Great choice of words, this was very much like a short story, a nice little reel of a very interesting story.

This is a good piece