Deep In The Minds of Men

Deep in the Minds of Men

Contemplates a lot of sin

Sometimes they can't begin

To be true to you or him

Deep in the minds of men

Love bubbles and then

They can comment and win

They are astonishing creatures

With very unique features

What would we do without them

Life would be but a whim

How logical they are

Like their own shining star

Life is interesting to say

They can tell you all day

What they think is important

Like paying the rent

They are heaven sent

But they can be bent

Deep in their brain

It always remains

The deep thought their in

With love so freely given

Never doubt their creativity

Not to include navitivate

You can love them although

They may not know how to show

You the best life that they can

That can be any man

To love you until death do you part

It's embedded deep in their heart

 

Reviews

[Hi]

"Deep in the Minds of Men
Contemplates a lot of sin."

Sin? I think not and I never lie about that. :) I wasn't quite sure where you were going with this. It seems a realistic, but mostly positive portrayal and expression though. I wasn't sure what "They can comment and win" meant. Is it "commit" and win?

[kyam]

Yes I think you are right and I thank you so very much for correcting me.. YOu are super in my Book! Hoorah to You!!!........Kyam

[Nature]

Enjoyed reading it. Right with beautiful words.
' You can love them although
They may not know how to show'.

[kyam]

Thank you for your kind review....it means alot to me......Kyam