Become

A letter to my son's father.

Become
As he got out of the car,
Heading into work,
I gazed proudly at him.
He was a man now,
Always my child,
But not a baby anymore.
I studied his gait and posture.
It was so familiar...
I realized for first time,
How much he was like you.
Tall, slender, handsome and shy.
Loves to explore the outdoors.
Camping, hiking and tubing.
He is polite and quite,
Til there something important to say.
Smart, strong, and determined.
Nothing was ever handed to him.
If he wanted something,
He worked hard for it.
Never did he like to play sports.
He'd rather grow a garden,
Or make glass into a beautiful art.
His art takes my breath away.
Seeing the man he has become,
Its so bittersweet.
Our youngest,
Our baby boy,
You would be so proud,
Of the man he has become.
I'll never understand,
Why you chose to not be apart of their lives. Though we we're over,
They still needed you.
It's been ten years now,
Since they've heard your voice.
If you could only see,
What our youngest son has become...
Now that he is a young man,
It's like I'm meeting a younger you...

L. Mack

5/18/18

Reviews

[Wild Rose]

Think we have all watched our children grow up
Find a wife and leave home
We moved away for work
Her parents were OK about it
Mine didn't like it at all > They emigrated to NZ to be with my sis

[LKBillips]

Deep and meaningful words. I enjoyed the emotions you conveyed and the positive among the sadness of an absent parent. Really strong piece.

[Lori Mack]

Thank you. God bless.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Lori with your words and your thoughts. I raised-up four children and I have three grand-boys. Wonderful and positive words shared. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lori Mack]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lori.