I Am His

all my poems have an inpiration

today a wonderful thought sprung to my mind.

for the first time i thought...

"he is mine."

it was uplifting. 

and  i loved it.

but then as he often does

just one of his sentences

changed my train of thought.

"he is not mine" i said to myself

"i am his."

Author's Note

Do Not Count My Poor Spelling & Grammatical Errors. pleez ^.^

Reviews

[Constance L. Hartwell]

the good thing about poetry is grammer, spelling, word choice it's all up to the poet who wrote it. when I read this I immedietly had a flashback about a certain "person." you paint a picture in my head with your words. you are very talented. kudos

[Honeypot]

I think this is sweet and simple. It doesn't mean to be worded differently as the emotions are strong. This one I completely understand. Great job.

[hiralarious]

I love the idea(:
The words could be more sophisticated, but nonetheless it was good(:
Great job, and I hope to see more poems written by you(: