tonight

i had a horrible march 27th

 tonight's the night

i wrote your name in my tears

and slit my wrists.

i don't know what I've done wrong

or if your just leading me on. 

but  i cant help but shed more tears for you.

i cant help but shed more blood for you.

but it doesn't matter to you.

for tonight's the night.

tonight's your night 

 

Author's Note

if you don't like it....i don't care.

Reviews

[Honeypot]

This was really good. Its bursting with emotion and you did a good job in writing it. I loved the line "i wrote your name in my tears"! Its so sad, but really beatifully written.

[Constance L. Hartwell]

this piece was beautifully dark. it makes me wanna go rent twilight! kudos.

[Silvario]

deep, dark and profound. drawing emotion from the reader with ease. nicely penned. I enjoyed it. well done. :)