addiction

 i lie here

 

in this empty room

 

i've almost had enough

 

your endlessly leading me on

 

or so i thought

 

what am i saying

 

ill never have enough of you

 

your too addicting

 

and yet i want to stop

 

its impossible

 

im spiraling downward.

 

you'd better act quickly

 

Author's Note

if you don't like it...i don't care

Reviews

[Constance L. Hartwell]

you captured the emotion very well. the word choice was perfect! however, you made a few spelling mistakes (line 8 "you're too addicting" instead). you have amazing talent and as a poet it's crucial to take the bad with the good. also as writers, if we want to grow we SHOULD care about what our readers think concerning our work. overall, you did an outstanding job as usual. thanks for posting.

[Silvario]

can really feel your emotions here. your urning, almost deperation. very nicely written. keep up the amazing work. :)