Play me

Play me

A Poem by lindsay

 When we first began conversing 
everything was better than great.
Our laughs could be heard over the hills, from miles away,
and there was nothing going wrong- as of late.

We shared deep talks of  life,emotion and love,
into the poems we wrote.
Then when push came to shove,
those little writings became simple  love notes.


And then those words came about, yet again:
"I really like spending time with you, but as of now, I see us as friends"

So is that why we talked about just living,
as you placed your head on my shoulder?
Is that why we spoke of breaking out
and not living life under society's boulder?

Say it again to me,
those three terrifying words.
Let me feel, hear and see-
what I guess you might of really wanted to be heard.

I am not saying that those emotions we not real,
but it sure was great living in the land of surreal.

I made you happy and I am glad. 
I know too, that you say you care deeply for me.
My question is though,
how can you not see that you and I are both quite sad?


So go ahead-play me. 
Let me let you listen to my heart 
as your's plays on and on
and let them combine;
record it. 
So you can have your broken half
and I can have mine.

© 2009 lindsay


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an amazing moment in devices, the boiling point in many ways, like common grounds, and what it means to acheive a mental balance, that scrapes the skin of love, but signifying friendship or terms, or allowence, more so, to reason the level of the heart, and determine the almsot.. the what ifs'. you have a brilliant way with words, keep it up lindsay.

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This was a story worth being told and you did it justice. Clever, insightful, and just plainly a beautiful heartbreak.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

an amazing moment in devices, the boiling point in many ways, like common grounds, and what it means to acheive a mental balance, that scrapes the skin of love, but signifying friendship or terms, or allowence, more so, to reason the level of the heart, and determine the almsot.. the what ifs'. you have a brilliant way with words, keep it up lindsay.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


It`s not you, it`s me. I am not good for you.
You wil find a girl worthy of your affection.
----Famous last words-----

This is a sad old story, but very well written.

-----rated------100 %

-----Eagle Cruagh

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This blew me away. It's crazy how much I can relate to it and how cleverly it was written! The end especially impressed me:

"So you can have your broken half
and I can have mine."

I really loved this. Kudos :]

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is very powerful emotional and deep,there is a misunderstanding of what is love in both partners or what each can mean to the other perhaps one just needs time to reflect but two negatives don't make a positive i think sometimes you need to spark off each other and offer something different in a relationship,the same old routine will tire eventually despite the warmth of a golden heart,i am sure this is taken from real life and it is incredibly honest and i admire anyone for opening up to the entire world about how one feels wearing their huge heart on their sleeve.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This was a very well expressed piece. It is sad when things become so difficult in a relationship. Very well written piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I really liked this.
I like how you showed that they sort of shared one heart.
Well written; great job.

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♥Jen Marks

Posted 10 Years Ago


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lindsay

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