Perfect lie

Perfect lie

A Poem by lindsay

I can feel you crawling under my skin.
Those dagger words are consuming me
and  my brain is filled up to the brim.
I can hear you in my head.
Whispering.
Whispering your favorite lies.
I can feel your pounding them in
as I shriek out my piercing cries.
My soul is being torn in two
and I have to choose between my heart or mind.
The only problem is 
your opinion is dominating mine.
My heart it aches 
because it is not given a chance to breath.
My mind is a broken wonderland
since I see zero truth in what you believe.
I am shaking in a feverish way
and I tremble when I you in sight.
Trying to think of things I could say
I am beaten with all your might.
Black or White.
Stop or Go.
What makes your life so perfect?
What proof of perfect do you have show?

© 2010 lindsay


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very captivating and emotional and honest! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A Very powerful inward look at the dark side of things. Very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


beautifully written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I had to come back and read this again :) very cool, especially the whole "nip/tuck" kind of relation. Picture is creepy ^_^ love it

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ooooh, interesting and "creepy"... Very nice, i like your poems! Emotional and deep... You're very creative!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Interesting to be haunted by anothers feelings of grandure Cast them off and fly freely by no one has the right to own your sky

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is beautiful. emotional yet very deep and creative. i like this one.

-Will

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kind of an emotional write here. I like the feel of this write. Flows wonderful and full of powerful emotion.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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lindsay

Mentor, OH



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