again

they leave me without a 2nd thought

is it because I've helped them move on

I doubt it

am I just that nerve racking with my constant complaints

she couldn't even tell me goodbye

now I'm left alone again

with no company besides my tears

she was the only one who truly listened and felt my sorrow or so I thought

again I'm left in  the shadows with this dirty beam of light

I thought she was my friend

I even had the nerve to think of her as a sister

but she left me like so many others

forever near you never know someone till to late

so again I've been used

again my tears fall form my face

again I'm in the dark place

I thought I could run from

I shouldn't been smarter then to think it

 

Reviews

[Dutch Jr.]

Nice write, your emotions are so vividly portrayed in this writing, which is thedriving force in any piece. Good work.

[A.Lee]

Wow, I can really relate to this poem. Actually, it feels similar to something I'm going through right now. Its painful being abandoned, especially by someone you thought would never hurt you that way. You brought your pain and feeling into this poem very well.

[..R.I.P..]

Very emotional, good job.
Some spelling errors.
Good job.
~Jan

I'm still here, silly. Just hiding from Stussy right now. I'm always on here!
Stop being sad! If I were going then I would have said goodbye! Cheer up.