F**k It.

This was in response to a poem that my ex wrote and sent to me. (ext. ending)

Im sick of this s**t

Sick of your bull

Your indecision

The way you say you care

Then treat me like a w***e.

Yeah, I know it was my choice, my decision

I know life aint fair!

Im not a little girl anymore

To believe in fairy tales and happy f****n endings

But for once, I wish they were true.

 

I don't want you to f*****g stay here

....I don't want you to go,

I want to go to sleep at night knowing

That youre mine

But I can't.

 

Love....F**k....Hate

Thats almost how it goes with us

The only problem is

You could never love me

And I,

well, I could never hate you.

It's a pity.

 

Oh f**k it,

F**k the bullshit,

here's what I really want to say...

Don't leave!

Don't make me f*****g beg,

Stop being sad.

Just let me make you happy.

I f*****g love you

With everything I've got.

 

....but that's just not enough if you don't love me back....

is it?

 

So just f**k it,

Don't mind me.

No I'm not crying,

Its just the rain.

Oh... We're inside?

Well then my eyes were just a little dry.

Trust me,

I'm done crying,

I'm done wanting to die

Because you couldn't care less for me

So why should I care if you lied?

I f*****g don't!

....But goddamn you, I do....

 

You may never care about me

But at least see me,

You stupid, blind f*****g man,

I LOVE YOU.

 

Reviews

[Seriana]

Boy, I must really be in the mood for this today, but I thought this was most fabulous. I hear your anger, your compassion. It is so vividly clear and painful. How we just WISH they'd get a clue. THEM, not us. Because we've got it. All of it. And if they cannot understand, well then. What can ya do? Wonderful write. I love the intimacy of your thoughts. Thank you so much for sharing them with this community. :)

[perfectlymetiKulous]

"Love....F**k....Hate
Thats almost how it goes with us
The only problem is
You could never love me
And I,
well, I could never hate you.
It's a pity." -- my favorite lines!

OMG. I can completely relate to this. There are probably a million people out there that can relate to this right now. I love the rawness of your words, they lend a special sense of reality and clarity to this poem. You expressed the rollercoaster of emotions in a quite succinct and graphically poignant way. I really enjoyed this write!

[nonbf3]

very powerful and angry. love it.

[Matthew D. Ford]

Wow. The power in your voice and your emotions are so loud and clear. I just adore this poem because it's so heartfelt and you don't give a crap. A beautiful piece, indeed. Although I avoid love, I feel you. I know what you mean because I feel this way sometimes, too. Extraordinary work.

[Balo Rhodes]

Wow pretty awesome ....
Raw emotional and wonderful
:)
How we just WISH they'd get a clue. THEM, not us. Because we've got it. All of it. And if they cannot understand, well then. What can ya do? Wonderful write. I love the intimacy of your thoughts. Thank you so much for sharing them with this community. :)

Ditto Seriana Below

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

i read this cause i saw seriana favorited it, and i trust her opinion on good wiriting. wos, this sounds like me on my bad days!! you sound just like me when i was angry at my ex. keep scribing.

[The Broken One]

I love raw, emotional writing like this. It is so honest and heart-felt. Thanks for sharing.

-Chad-

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

This is very emotional, i could feel every word you said in my heart, i like this.