Adulation

Adulation

A Poem by Tai Ryens
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Oh, love, how we meet once again.
I've fell in love at random, I've fell in love with friends.
In this piece, I will use the best of my arts.
Hopefully even pave a way into your heart.

So many reasons why I think I'm in love.
That warm feeling in my heart, especially when I get your hugs.
All those butterflies you've given me in my tummy.
All of those giddy moments we had shared, Haha!  You're so funny!

Just seeing you brings a smile to my face.
I don't say it much, but you brighten up my darkest days.
By now I believe you know every inch of my soul.
It's quite strange despite that, you still love me as a whole.

I love my nicknames for you, dear, darling, my silly cupcake.
In this garden of life, you're definitely no snake.
I love you for you, promise me you'll never change.
So long as I stay with you, I'll never turn deranged.

I'll never forget that day you fell asleep in my arms.
I couldn't believe that you trusted me to keep you from harm.
You're so dear to my heart, I believe that this love is true.
So I guess that the only thing in this Earth that I want is YOU.

I love you . . .
No, scratch that out.
I'm IN love with you (;

© 2011 Tai Ryens


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Such a sweet poem! I liked the mood of it, although I will say I think you have definitely expanded as a writer. Wonderful write nonetheless!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tai Ryens

9 Years Ago

Indeed, I have evolved from teenage rants about love to clever pieces of dark poetry . . .
its rilly a sweet one...great work buddy!! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awww..... its beautiful.... :) I love the ending, "I love you . . . No, scratch that out. I'm IN love with you." Soooo cute!

Posted 10 Years Ago


awwwwww!!!!!!! What else can I say AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yes, yes I did, Tai x3

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'm sure that you loved it too, Astrid ;D

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is beautiful. I'm sure she loves it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aw...Totally sweet, Tai...This is actually great...
"Just seeing you brings a smile to my face.
I don't say it much, but you brighten up my darkest days."
I like the rhyme scheme very much! And wish you luck on the contest!
I hope you win! :)))

Posted 10 Years Ago


"I'll never forget that day you fell asleep in my arms.
I couldn't believe that you trusted me to keep you from harm."

This one's a really good take on a simple and often times overlooked gesture. This is really sweet. Another great write from you. ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on November 17, 2011
Last Updated on November 23, 2011
Tags: love, her, girlfriend, first love, i love you, true, heart

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Tai Ryens
Tai Ryens

Bay Area, CA



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