Lingering

Only a portion from the middle of my book.

And after I let the words escape my lips, a small gasp soon trailed after it. His facial expression was unreadable, putting me somewhere that I didn't want to be, clueless. It seemed as if forever had gone by before his expression softened and he said something I'd remember for the rest of my life..."You're everything I will ever need. There isn't anything or anyone that could take your spot in my heart. You haven't only stolen my heart but you have crept into my body and left your existence lingering in my soul. I haven't been able to read how you've felt for me and it has been slowly killing me. I watched you fall for other guys that were never right for you. My heart was calling out for you but my mouth couldn't fathom the words to say. You only deserve the best and I couldn't think of anything perfect enough to say to you to describe these feelings inside of me and how much I yearn for you to be by my side, everyday for the rest of my life. I love you doesn't seem right to say because it would be an understatement. I'm tired of seeing you get your heart broken, being with the wrong guys. I won't let it happen again. I'm taking advantage of this to let you know that I'd be honored to call you my own. To be able to see your smile and know that it is because of me. To be able to hold you when you cry and protect you with my life. I want to make you the center of my world and make you the happiest you'll ever be." So overwhelmed by emotion and completely caught up in the moment, I did the unthinkable.. I kissed him. Not just a peck, but a full on smooch. It was my way of relaying everything I'd ever felt for him in the last few years without words and in a matter of seconds. His palm touched my supple cheeks and it felt like home. Who could have ever known the guy I'd fallen head over heels for in 9th grade could have felt the same about me, 15 years later?

Author's Note

This is only portion of what I have in mind. Do you think I should continue?

Reviews

[Mia Sparrow]

this is very well-written. i picture a boy who has never crossed the line from being her friend to professing his love for her. how he has always been respectful towards her and wanting the best for her. then he finally got the courage to divulge his feelings. his words are so sweet it is easy to be wooed by them. great job. i hope you complete your book.

[Chris]

A story deserves a chance to be told... so you will never know it's worth if you don't tell it the best way you can.