ode to a lost love...

to say the least

i loved you whole

to say goodbye

and youll never know

to say goodnight

and walk away

to leave it all

and for pain to stay

to lose a love

for the first time

and become a poet

and start to rhyme

to end it all

and shut the door

to die away

from the love before

to leave my heart

at your door

and walk away

and think nothing more

to lose your love

at my expense

to walk away

and cry ever since.

Reviews

[.Bunnie.]

Certainly a sweet and heartfelt piece! :) Good job.... The whole thing flowed immensely well and took the reader alongside for a nice little ride!

[bluessadmood]

Oh my friend such a lovely way to tell us your thoughts..
I loved you whole and you walk away and leave it all,and the pain stays and lose it all
And I become a poet and start to rhyme,shut my door and die away,a love before
Left my heart at your door,it died away,and walk away think nothing more,and cry
what loveliness..lost a love turned me to a poet ,started to rhyme,to end it all ,i shut my door
what loveliness ,you never stop to amaze me..
lovely write..