lure me to you.

lure me to you.

A Poem by funeralmoon

like a fallen angel

like a beautiful stranger

you look through my soul

and you tear a whole

 the deeper i die

 the farther you fly

does it matter to a beautiful face

no is a word i wont say

to an angel none the less

an angel digraced

an angel with an evil taste

blood on your wings

sing to me angel

oh beautiful stranger

cut me from within

fly to the sin

welcome to the end

you fallen angel

© 2009 funeralmoon


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

WOW..................
Umm. Ive heard some powerful words before. But none like this.
You really seriously struck a chord. Hit a vein. I see the infliction reflected back onto the inflicter.
I used to have a medal of a saint. And on it in latin it was inscribed...
"Do not tempt me with your wicked ways, what you offer me is evil, drink the poison yourself."
Excellent poem, Moon.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh what loveliness ,just cant have enough of your words..
A fallen angel and beautiful stranger you look into my soul,you tear a whole
the more I die ,the higher you fly still I look into your beautiful face
No a word I ll never say,to an angel disgraced,evil taste,blood on your wings
Sing to me you beautiful stranger,cut me from within,still you are welcome to the end
this is nice and lovely,how i got accustomed to your writings ,so sweet they are
lovely write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


an angel with an evil taste

blood on your wings

sing to me angel

oh beautiful stranger

cut me from within

fly to the sin

i like this alot..it speaks to me..and is touching to me... great write..well writen..

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is like a beautiful melody " the deeper I die , the farther you fly" these words are pristine . I really like the way you write, awesome job.

Posted 14 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

150 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on May 17, 2009

Author

funeralmoon
funeralmoon

Wonderland



About
We can only erase words, but not our past. I am a minimalist, who loves writing, painting, and nature. I write what I feel because it is a good outlet to channel my emotions through. I feel like.. more..

Writing
Gone. Gone.

A Poem by funeralmoon



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..