Inhale. Exhale.

the sound the night screams to remember
to look out beyond what i see
to inhale the smoke of my fears
and realize that I can breathe

I was torn down in my spirit
for what f**k ups though of me
I wasted my pity on you
and now its me I finally see

I am the night and her temporary sound
I am the music in your soul
I am that loud voice in the crowd
and the heart that's black as coal

i am the bearer of pain and sorrow
but i hold love on my lips
i do not forget the past but love tomorrow
and i live knowing i will trip.

the sound the night I now remember
i look out beyond what i see
I inhaled the smoke of my fears
and realized that I still breathe

I feel the wind on my back
and cherish the dry desert heat
I have returned to live now
and your comments you can keep.

I had a fire that burned
until i let them fill me with doubt
now try to f**k with my fire
and Ill burn your f*****g eyes out.  

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

Beautiful :) I love it!

[bluessadmood]

this was so beautiful my friend ,full of disturbed and raging emotions
thats how we always should be ..all on fire we should never let the cold creeps
how i loved those lines..
i am your night and all its sounds,the music that moves your soul
my voice so loud even in a crowd,and the heart black as coal
i bear all your pains and sorrow..had so much love on lips
ready to forget the past and live all my tomorrows
how i loved this ..such use of words ..breath taking
lovely write..

[Lady Lazarus.]

a piece of extreme beauty and sadness...when one is un pain and life is too powerful to comprehend sometimes it feels like breathing is a horrible thing...too much.
I enjoyed this a lot...the rhyme scheme was very good and your word choice was as well.