hell.

hell.

A Poem by lauren1196

I can see through this hell you are hiding.

I can see you’re not always okay.

I know you have trouble deciding,

I know that you’ll soon find a way.


I hear all your cries.

The pain is immense.

You’re bathing in lies,

Oh darling you’re drenched.


I see you are living in sorrow.

Hope just seems too far away.

I can say that there’s always tomorrow,

But life is for living today.

© 2010 lauren1196


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This is fantastic! Such a powerful write. Great job! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


Poem is powerful. I could feel the fear and disappointment in your words. Last line was too true. Tomorrow doesn't matter when you are swimming in B.S today. A outstanding poem.
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Posted 14 Years Ago



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