Gone.

4-27-10

And just like that you were gone like the sand on the beaches of a dried up ocean like my heart feeling weak, drained of emotion it hurts to cry and it hurts to sleep feels like a year, but its been a week where are you now gone from my sight your voices echoes inside me but youve gone to the light unbearable heavy is the pain that i feel i no longer question is hell on earth real? im living it now youve left me for good id wait forever and a day for your return if i only knew you could.

Reviews

[Nameless]

Very good poem. I am sorry for the death of your dear beloved. Good rhyme and story. Nothing seemed forced here. I hope you feel better.