Summer Love

Innocent Love.

Flowing breezes with gentle heat,

Fragrant flowers scents so sweet.

Blinding sunshine from above,

Spring romance and summer love.

People search for the sun,

As summer season has begun.

Bodies upon a sandy beach,

A state of relaxation in their reach.

The song of summer in the air,

As heartbeats join together to share.

With honey lips they so gently kiss,

Sharing a moment of loving bliss.

As darkness falls upon the shore,

Their feelings deepen even more.

With starlight shinning from above,

They lose each other in summer love.

Share the love you have to give,

And love the life you choose to live.

Reviews

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

=D This was really good! I like how it uses alot of tender descriptions and speaks of people being in love, yet leaves the who open for the reader to insert their own person. The last stanza was amazing! The whole piece closes really well with those two lines, leaving us with a dose of wisdom. Great Job! =D

XO - Kate

[Lauren Aurora]

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing this one !

[JenniferMarie]

Beautiful poem. Beautiful images. I really like the message of the last two lines. It's so true.

[Lauren Aurora]

Thank you so much Jennifer !

[JenniferMarie]

Of course. I'm happy to review a beautiful poem.

[Claire Lorraine]

Such a lovely poem! The images float before me as I read it. You did very well intertwining the emotions with nature and capturing the essence of Summer Love.

[Lauren Aurora]

Wow, thank you so much!

[Audrey Elisabeth]

I really love this image evoking poem that brings out lovely memories :)

[Lauren Aurora]

I'm so glad to hear that, thank you!