A Poem by Larry Dyson

haiku written in spanish


Pensando aqui

y tu aspecto alla

en totalmente mi amor



literal translation is:


Me thinking here

your pressence there

all I am thinking about my love

© 2011 Larry Dyson

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There is a presence in this poem that feeds the mind with detailed treasures.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Yo creo ques este escriba tiene que representar su corazon en su verdad completa. Muchissimas gracias por este, compadre.

Posted 12 Years Ago

creo que es muy hermosa

Posted 12 Years Ago

In my neighborhood, a block in any direction, will find this brought to English in slightly different ways. All will agree that this is a work of fine art!

Posted 12 Years Ago

another way to say in proper spanish- formal(todos que estoy pensando mi amor)among others...a friend asked about the translation and I am told and am finding that idioms are different depending on who and where and tone of writing..some words and thoughts are impled by the structure and meanings of the wrting.IMHO

Posted 12 Years Ago

I jus completed my 2yrs of advance spanish (A'levels) This is inspiring me to start writing in spanish again. This is such a romantic piece. Ps, i didnt realize thts how you say the last line...i learnt more than one thing from reading this piece today

Posted 12 Years Ago

Love it!
Very romantic

Posted 12 Years Ago

Whew, glad you had this translated in English! I loved the whole feel of it, Beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


Posted 12 Years Ago

Nice thoughts... and well done.


Posted 12 Years Ago

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15 Reviews
Added on August 24, 2011
Last Updated on August 31, 2011
Tags: worrying, thinking, you


Larry Dyson
Larry Dyson

Tomball /Magnolia, TX

WARNING!!--- my writing approaches Mature most of the time, read with caution if you are concerned ,or so WC thinks? - I'm a retired southern woods walker..who writes and lives modestly..I love n.. more..


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