Sparrow

Photo Credit: Martin Belan http://blog.martinbelan.com/blog/

As the movement of shifting dawn enlivens that which was withdrawn

Watch the sparrow beauty be and know within you set her free.  

The new daylight of hope evades thy souls once subdued shades. Transformed as she transcends from sight, no longer held down by plight.

The rising splendor of golden rays

Marks the end of weary days.

Reviews

[Doodley]

Beautiful and eloquently written work. Nicely done.

[Gregory Lara]

Beautiful write, I can really connect to this. We all go through a time where we must seek the light of hope to end our trouble days.

The rising splendor of golden rays
Marks the end of weary days.

Great lines to wrap up this piece.

[θεά]

What a quaint little liberating poem!
Very nicely and gently worded with quiet, self-assured wisdom.

Liked reading this.

Look forward to your other works,

Best,
M.

[Uche Paul]

Cool Piece... This Poem seems to set my troubled heart free this morning. For that, I'm giving you 70/100.