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A Poem by pressedflowers
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not sure if this is a poem or a series of ideas

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we live or die 
we live and then we die 
we don't live and die anyway 
As soon as I start to feel comfortable there is 
an interruption. Or maybe the interruption is a reminder that I was 
comfortable. 
vulnerability is a wounded animal waiting to be eaten 

© 2022 pressedflowers


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Wow what a short yet beautiful piece. I love the connection between vulnerability and waiting to be eaten, it is such a great metaphor. :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Actually, it is a poem containing some ancient truths. Everything is changing. Both human life and human comfort are temporary situations. This is why we have wine.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on December 11, 2022
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