Save the last dance

Save the last dance

A Poem by "Fanatical Dreamer"

ShhhThis is our moment,

when our soul…swirls through

the soothing rhythm,

and our mind… connects

with our glorious world.

Move! This is our moment,

when our arms… releases

our draining tears, and

our hips... travels through

and around, a dim enchanting room.

Come! This is our moment,

when our hearts… follows the

rhythm of the drums, and

our lips… goes wherever the

guitarist goes………………...



 

 

 

© 2014 "Fanatical Dreamer"


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Your write flows with the picture and captures the moment..well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Thank you,I'm glad you like it
I love this...very creative...and love how you ended it...beautiful photo too...Rose:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
A melodious rhythmic song than just a poem...The image goes very well with the words....thanks for sharing it

Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Thank you for time and review
I love this one, so musical and it goes well with your title, the pic speaks it all

Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Oh I do love this one...charming indeed. Now I want to tango around the dance floor or something ;-)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Hahaha good to know
May I have the next dance?????

Very cute Dreamer, I could hear the melody of your words and I danced my way through this fun poem

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Posted 10 Years Ago


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 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Gotta find my dancing shoes first :D,thank you!

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Added on August 28, 2013
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