flusterd

just confused about life and the people in it

as i sit i think and wonder

y am i stuck in a storm of thunder

lightining is hitting everything in sight

everythings blury i only see light

y did my clouds ever grow grey

will they leave or forever stay

thoughts and voices fill my head

repeating everything ive once said

make it stop make it stop

for these memories hurt alot

wen will the sun come out

thoughts so loud i have to shout!

go away plz and leave me alone

as i sit they were suddenly gone?

was i dreaming?.......... here they come again!

 

Author's Note

bad memories and painstaking desicions inspired me to write this peace.

Reviews

[karmic]

Great show of confusion and the feeling of being lost. Also nice twist at the end, by you thinking it was a dream, but then it came back. Great write.

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

I was already sad but this made it worse, sadface. But really awsome write, it portrays your emotion to the reader and anyone who reads this can think of a time that they have felt this way before. Awsome write.