I Am My Own Person

I Am My Own Person

A Poem by len
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The theme of this poem is to show the essence of a complicated relationship between a child and a parent. This is for school, give me some feedback on stuff in the poem I can improve in!

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Your brain is my brain 

My grades are your reputation

But my life is your life

Your expectations are sky-high but 

Even you can’t reach it


You project onto me as if I’m not my own person

You pour your feelings into me 

You cry and cry when I say I don’t like it as if

I’m not my own person


Maybe, I’m not my own person but

I have feelings 

I have a brain 

I have a heart

I even have friends

And I have eyes that twinkle like a child

That you abandoned


It seems you’ve forgotten so

I’ll say this once again

I have feelings

I have my own brain 

I have a heart

I even have friends

And I have my own life

Not yours

© 2023 len


Author's Note

len
Give me some ways to mention how even though the child is so drained, they still love their parent, because I'm having some trouble on that ;[

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Added on May 18, 2023
Last Updated on May 18, 2023
Tags: Sad Stuff, Emotional Abuse mentioned (alot , Angst, This child is done with their pa

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len
len

HI



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I write a lot just for school work, but I enjoy writing poetry, and fanfics of fandoms I'm passionate about! :] more..