At One Point

At One Point

A Poem by Leticia

At one point

You were everything that I could have asked for.

You had my thoughts

You had my smiles

You had fears

You had my worries

You had my love

You had my HEART.

In the passing of a shooting star all that was taken from me.

You took those things that I gave hoping that you would treasure

Instead you disregard them like trash you throw away.

You took my HEART and dismiss it once you had no more use for it.

© 2014 Leticia


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Well written. Relationships. We soar and we crash and we say never again until we do it all again.

Keep up the good writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emotional, full of feelings and love...interesting work of your my friend and I truly enjoyed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on January 17, 2014
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Leticia
Leticia

CA



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