SUNSET LAKE

I love my weekend trips to the river with my friends. It's never some planned out trip, it's just about all of us, together, making memories.

On a windy Easter Sunday, the sun was shining bright.

A group of people went to the river for an afternoon delight.
Even though it was last minute, we surely did not care;

all we wanted was some fun and feel the wind blow through our hair.
None of us were ready for what we had in store,

all we knew was we had friendships, lasting beyond that sandy shore.
Some of us took pictures, all of us drank beer;

and as that sun went down, it quickly drew us near.
Talking about loved ones, whose soul's clearly remain,

brought us all together.. Every story was explained.
Who knew on that one day, so very much could happen

and relationships could be formed and continue with so much passion.
Even though it is still early, and there are more memories to make,

I still would choose the river.. Over any Sunset Lake.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Lovely tale you've shared with us.

NOTES: Again, I think this would benefit from each line being broken into couplets.