Foretoken

Young Felix must overcome Fate, the person who's been behind the makings of order within our world. Is it worth making our own destinies, at the cost of creating utter chaos?!

“Wow, thank you! I can't believe you actually got these!”
“Ah, don't mention it. Seriously, it was a cinch finding them.”

“But aren't they really expensive?! Don't I owe you something, like $100?”
“No! No, it's okay these tickets are on me, they were a special deal.”
“Wow! Two front row tickets to see Total Free Time live in concert! I'm totally going to blow Jeremy's mind when he finds out we can go to the show.”
“W-Huh?” Felix was taken aback as July beamed in excitement, gripping the tickets firmly in her hands like they may disappear any second. She glanced up at him and noticed his confused expression, “Oh sorry, I thought I told you. I was trying to get the tickets so that Jeremy Faucet could take me. It's his favorite band, he'll be totally stoked!”
Felix had only moments to recover, “Y-yeah, I think you did say that. Well awesome! Hope you guys have a great time!”
“Thanks Felix! You don't know how much this means to me. You're the bestest!” She smiled warmly, patted him on the shoulder and skipped off down the hallway past the group of goths loitering around the pop machine, making them recoil from her dazzling blonde complexion and enthusiasm. He stood there for a time, watching her go, a smirk across his face as he thought of the thousand impossibilities running aimlessly through his head. Maybe Jeremy couldn't go. Maybe she'd change her mind. Maybe-.
Maybe you need to get a grip, Felix finished his thoughts as he ran his hand over his dusty brown hair, turning around to head back to his locker. Not noticing his foot slip almost perfectly into a crack of the flooring, he took a step and caught himself tumbling to the ground, books and folders scattering every which way. His face slapped into the linoleum and he groaned as the wind had almost all been knocked out of him. 

Reviews

[mattefox]

Did you finish this? I'm intrigued as to how you are going to proceed within the fantasy genre!

[Malychyte]

Haha yeah, I'm intrigued as well really. No I haven't finished this (at all really) but I have a large layout of the story in my head. Basically Fate (a person who lives outside of time) sits in front of a Seed that has sprouted thousands upon thousands of lines that weeve in and out everywhere. His job is to twist these lines in the right direction so that they all flow back together and become a seed once again. (Keeping the order and whatnot. Every line depicts someone's life pretty much) but the main character Felix fights to make his own choices and not what's for the best of the Seed. So Fate struggles with him, gets fed up with him, then throws Felix into a world called the Vastlands.
This is where the fantasy part picks up. This world is supposedly a world that all people who have no hopes and dreams go, but he meets up with a few people who are striving for something greater. The world is much like other fantasies, a world where people use swords and bows created from their Beliefs, and they try to take down Fate.
Fate isn't the bad guy though because if you deny the Seed too much you open up Chaos that becomes the real evil within the story.
Sorry, the reason Im explaining this now is beause...it'll be a LONG time before it's finished. Im working on the other three stories in my inventory along with it and my motivation is just...something else. lol
Sorry to bum you out but thanks for finding this story interesting, hope this helps! Also your 'Not All Those Who Wander Are Lost' is really inspiring to me. It's how I feel a lot of the time while I have to sadly work full time at a lousy job. But it still gives me that dream to adventure, and that's why i try to write these stories out.
Anyways thanks for reading!

[mattefox]

I was glued to this whilst reading haha, I think you have an amazing mind! I really love how you've come up with the idea of the seed, it's so creative :-) and thanks so much for reading mine, that's the feeling I was trying to achieve!