'I hope I don't regret saying this...'

...my life... so far...

 

The last, the
l..l..last century.

- the last,
before the last:
'I hope I don't regret saying this...'

 

The last, the
l..l..last century.
Space flight.
'I hope... I don't...'
before the last...
the l..l..last:

 

'One small step...'
'I hope.'
So...

'I hope I don't regret... saying... this...'

Reviews

[Raef C. Boylan]

LOL.
I may have read this wrong, but it made me think of Armstrong feeling like his life has been summed up in one caption - and you taking that and mocking him in his moment of glory.
Great stuff.

As someone who had a stammer in secondary school, I really related to this on another level too.

I'm not sure if I completely understood the reference to the last century and stuff. Moon landing is a big part of it I guess, something we all claim as an achievement.

Just had a thought: if a werewolf lived on the moon...what would happen?
Happy birthday. Thanks for sharing this interesting piece.

[Who among Fire]

I like the style this is written in. Actually this reads like perfection. I'm terribly glad that I've read this.

[John B]

Very unusal but in a good way mate, Its one of those poems in which everyone will read into it different meanings well done

[Dez]

your poem is a bit like john lennon's lyrics.
look and sounds interesting, but obscure of meaning

I hope I don't regret saying this...

dezy macedo