A-Z

some things can never be put right ...

a to z
unsaying the said,
where truth becomes fiction
and lies in your head
 

mortally wounding
scars never shed,

truly ...
some things would be better 
just left unsaid

Reviews

[Toni Prehoda Kahler]

I feel the intensity of this piece, especially that it seems to encompass so much: "a to z" . I do wish I knew more specifics here, but at the same time I get the gist. I wonder if it is you, the wounded, or you, who has wounded someone.

I like the sound and message of "unsaying the said". I like that it makes me imagine that words are flying round and round in your head as you try to take them back, or wish they had never been said to you... Very potent, and the short lines emphasize that feeling. Do wish I knew more, I like details...but it's an honest piece, thank you.

[Poeticpiers]

Sometimes what you do not say speaks volomes whilst what you do say is meaningless

[emmajoy]

Oh I like this, like it very much!

It flows, the meter's great, it provokes thought...

I won't say more, it's best left .. unsaid.

[Sarah]

I love this! It's so short, and yet complex and really catchy with the rhyme and short lines. (: I love the way this poem is set up, with "truly" as it's own line & the repetition of "said" at the beginning and then at the end. Great job with this!

[Mr. Lopez]

Very good words .A strong message with few words can be very hard to do. You accomplish it really good here. Great job.

[Legion]

Ain't that the truth. For such a short piece that doesn't really clarify what the problem actually is, this was well versed. I like it.