foreva and ever

Something which describes an emotion known as love

I really don't want to look into the past
All the bad memores I will cast
I will move on with a hope in my life
That smday I will be your wife
This time I am not gonna let ourselvse sway
I prms I ll never leave you and go away
Things might turn difficult or worse
But v ll never put our relation under god s curse
God put us together for a reason
I ll be the star and you be the sun
Evn if we fight and try to part
U cling to me and never let me b apart
I don't know its love or a mere liking..
But I promise I ll never fake a thing
I ll try to be as lving n caring as you are
And I ll always miss u whether you near or far
I might have put aside my dreams for you
Because people like you are quite a few
The way you care , the way you look upon me
In your eyes its just love that I see
Pl never do change for anyone or even me
Because I loved you for who you are and not someone who you could be

Author's Note

This is my first poem that I writing on dis page ..
Kindly give your reviews .. it would mean a lot ..

Reviews

[Nessly]

Hey! I suggest editing this piece for grammar and parallel errors/issues if you feel the need. Regardless, your message was clear and your words were felt while perusing through them.

[Lijo Jose]

Sure thing .. Too much of SMS language spoiled it..
Will take ur review in note..
Thankyou so much

[Nessly]

You don't have to change the SMS language. I like how you incorporated it into your work. You're Welcome.

[Adam Adams]

interesting!
originality's what one always longs to care for the most rather running after being someone what we are not. somehow you remind me one of my dang fav. quotes coined by one of my many hottest hollywood queens named marilyn monroe , who once whispered across the arena of this universe that: "Wanting to be someone's a waste of person you are." ah.. and your poetry's well treasured with such uplifting words. nice work here. looking forward to reading "you"!

[Lijo Jose]

Those were such sweet words.. Thankyou so much for bucking up my spirit..
People like you are the reason I look forward on writing more..

[Adam Adams]

really? then i guess, imma "buck" up your spirit a bit more. pleased to re-kindle your raged soul.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hope..longing.. Passion.. All in one place.. This is simple and sweet. Loved reading it ☺

[Lijo Jose]

Thankyou so much..
I m really glad u liked it..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! It was a pleasure ☺