Fallen Tears

 Come my love and let us leave

  Into the rain where we shall grieve 

Take my hand and we will go

Where Fallen Tears of sorrow show

Let's run away and leave it here

Away from them, away from fear

Let us go and please just try

To get away from this Fatal Lullaby

So now my love, we shall go

Where all the Fallen Tears will show

Reviews

[William Kilganon]

And when these tears
stay through the years
how my dear
shall i continue to fear
for then i shall know
that id have nothing to show
if not for that midnight crowe

[Nami Machae]

Haha this is super sweet will. I actually have tears in my eyes right now :) ill talk to you soon i promise

[Ethale Captor]

There are no words that can describe how much I loved this piece. Excellent work, definitely beautiful.

[NaugleB]

I really enjoy your writing, so captivating. This is of course a beautifully written poem, you have a true gift of capturing an audience and keeping our eyes peeled until the very end.

[RiverSong]

I loved your poem. It's written very well and expresses a complex meaning behind it in a simple way, it's beautiful.

[AWickedMoon]

I loved your poem it's so simple yet so beautiful. One of my favorite I've seen so far.

[Nikki]

I love the way it's written it reads smoothly. :3

[Aaron]

I haven't read a rhyming poem in a while.
It's good to see someone that's still doing it.

It makes me think of accepting that you don't always have to be interested in making sure that your always happen. There are times in life when it is appropriate to grieve. There are times when it's okay to not feel good.

[T. Logan]

I love the simplicity of this, but it's also really complex at the same time, if that makes any sense at all. :P But I really do like this.

[Fighter/Lover]

As I said before when you sent it to me..... I LOVE THIS!