Dawn Til Dusk

Let us see

what we can be

happy?

sad?

love?

hate?

the choices are endless

for you and me

so let us see

what we can be

watching the sun go down

Let us laugh

let us cry

we can do anything 

as long as we try

I love you

You love me 

Opposites attract I suppose

So let us laugh

and let us cry

under the shooting stars

Let us dance

let us sleep

stop the madness

do not weep

Laugh my angel

Laugh for me

So we can dance

And we can sleep

Arms tightly around each other

As the sun rises

Author's Note

Enjoy. I was bored :)

Reviews

[Sharon]

I like the way you wrote this piece of writing. Its really beautiful.

[Ethale Captor]

Excellent job well done. This piece, I believe, captures the essence of love and freedom in a compact and perfectly pieced way.

[Sarah]

Lovely, I think it all flows well. Love the last 4 lines, they show a lot of emotion. :))

[Nami Machae]

thank you :P

[AWickedMoon]

I liked it the only thing was the line "Opposites attract I suppose" To me it felt a bit out of place, you could try "opposites attract?" But that is also just from my perspective. :)

-Wicked

[Nami Machae]

thank you :) ill see what i can do about that