[untitled]

As, I'm sitting here,
I've got millions of things
Running through my head.
None of them are making
Any sense.
I'm even having problems
With writing what I want.

You don't see that I'm hurting
You don't see that it's been
For such a long time.
I want us to be okay.
But do you truly think,
It's going to be?

Can we truly work on it?
Can we truly forgive
everything that has happened?
Can we truly, go on and
Not worry something like this is
going to happen again?

You make me have this weird feeling
in the pit of my stomach
you make me feel happy
i tell you this
time and time again
yet for some reason,

it's like you're completely oblivous to it.
i want you to understand me
i want you to know me
i want you to believe in me
i want you to trust in me again

i love you
more than words or actions
could ever say
can't you just trust me on that?

i have never felt so strongly about
someone
you are the only person
that has ever made me feel this way
you are the ONLY person
i want to feel this way from

i don't want to wake up in the
mornings to anyone else but you
i want to kiss you every single night
i want to know that you will always
have my heart

for any of this, we need
to work on each other
i want this
more than anything
but how much do you want it?

can we take back all of the
negative attitudes?
can we move forward from all
of this?
i guess the only way too see,
is to try.
can you do that for me?
please?

Reviews

[capn_bribri]

love the emotion
good flow
great job

-yuki

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Wow what a powerful and emotional write. Its like your screaming at someone and for whatever reason they just don't hear you. Sometime the one your nearest too is the one who is sometime the hardest to get to understand you and what you try to say. A wonderful write.

[KonxOmPax]

The sincerity is strongly there, saying "hello...are you listening?". I can honestly relate to some of the things described in the poem through personal experience. Overall, very nice write.

[Meredith Leigh]

I can feel the emotion in this piece. Great write.

- Kriss