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Jason grab the fleece
Set it squarely under there
While Murray tightens the girth
Madge how many tries does it take to put on a bridle?
I don�t care if the nose armor�s low
So long as it�s straight
Where is Jacques with that damned chain
How are we ever going to be ready by nine
They�re carrying him in now ?
Streuth! The tail wrap�s slipped
Elmwood you�d better pray
he can�t see through that new visor
That saddle horn is duller than Clyde mud
Where is David with the shield grease?
What�s wrong with you people?
The tourney�s about to begin
and Gods Hammer we�re third in the grovel line
Again!!
Who has the lance duty today?
Shards and Sweetness Victor
What have you been feeding this steed?

Reviews

[Ed Hart]

forsooth, just great...

[Phibby Venable]

i love your images always ....great pacing also.

[Sel Whiteley]

Beautiful, great characterisation, you filmically capture a very transient moment. You able to show the people and their intriguing relationships with each other and the subject.

[Vanessa Whiteley]

This is wonderful and very whimsical.

[Gandré]

To interpret this poem was quite difficult for me, what I know - it is a moment of your time, from your past. What I liked about it is its 'naturalistic' performance and refreshing monologue. Thanks for explaining me in PM, now I see it clearer. Always great writing.