A new language

Senses not in present tense

The alphabet is not clear

This can be a new dialect 

I have to name it 

It is definitely monotonous

This may be a new language

I may try to learn bits and pieces

Never know it may get clearer later on

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such alliteration in the first line....just creates the atmosphere for the rest of the write.
poets try to come up with our own language....and yet in the end...are we just plagiarizing lines and words that someone else wrote once...maybe they are hidden in our subconscious and don't become clear to us until we write them down.
do our own writes look familiar the first time we read them?
I like the direction this poem prods us towards...makes us reflect.
j.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot for the very positive review, so proud and happy among all the amazing writers, Take care.

[Sami Khalil]

I always thought languages are the bedrock of communication. They are part and parcel of civilizations. They rise and fall with man. Some languages stay alive, others die and fade away. I feel you have a personal language you want to share with us.

[Linda alexander]

Thanks a lot sami for the very positive review, I feel like a writer now a days. Thanks a lot for supporting me especially in the very beginning stages when I was so afraid of writing.

[Sami Khalil]

You are always welcome.