Gone of Presence

I'm so confused
Like being spinned
On a potter's wheel
With mixtures of feels

My mind is being tossed
Upside down
Every corner
All around

I'm so distant
Like being undeewater
Or sucked in a blackhole
In an instant

My absence of concious
Does not bother anyone
Because a lost soul
Tells them I'm done

I am good and gone
With a broken smile
As I drift away
I won't be seen in awhile

Author's Note

Might be alittle sad

Reviews

[K Scott Smith]

I really liked this. It's interesting and captured me fully.

[Lindsey Nguyen]

I'm so glad! Thank you sooo much!