Loop

Loop

A Poem by linhpham

Just another day, to rise, to eat

and sleep

Just another day, to rise, to sleep

and weep,

and to be wronged, to be reminded

the love of others how you wish you own,

you don’t

Just another drop in the ocean, you try to flow,

but you break your own waves,

you ache.

 

It is just you,

you little unhappy one

Lay your damned thoughts on a pillow

And decide to be happy, once

Let the shadow thrives and suffuses your eyes

Weep if you have to, but sleep

away the sea of sorrow, into the night.

© 2016 linhpham


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It is just you,
you little unhappy one..

WOW! SUCH AMAZING LINES AND DEEP ONE

Posted 7 Years Ago


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JC
achingly beautiful and touchingly real. You give voice to loneliness and in your baring of yourself make us feel that at least someone else is feeling this way as well. Great work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice work,at first i didnt get it,but then i re read it and it made a whole lot of sense..nice work and keep on writing

Posted 8 Years Ago



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linhpham
linhpham

Vancouver, Canada



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